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revised scene 18 of 175

before: The nerve of that girl -- that she should not know her betters. Very generic, very penny-dreadful.

after: His blood raced, his heart pounded, at the thought of how his future bride had humiliated him in front of her women.

beginning total: 113
ending total: 113
net gain/loss: 0


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